With this story, I almost feel as though the end seems rushed. Well, at least from what ive read so far.
This delivery man is interesting, but it seems like a large task to over come. You mentioned he travels though an entire village too. Now from my seat, that kinda seems like alot to animate. Consider more abstract charactures maybe. Create some kinda of creature, cartoon, ect... in order to cut back on work load.
But over all it seems interesting. I would just say to round off your ending a bit more. It seems unclear to me from what ive read, how you would show this kind of moral decision without a long drawn out story of the main characture.
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With this story, I almost feel as though the end seems rushed. Well, at least from what ive read so far.
This delivery man is interesting, but it seems like a large task to over come. You mentioned he travels though an entire village too. Now from my seat, that kinda seems like alot to animate. Consider more abstract charactures maybe. Create some kinda of creature, cartoon, ect... in order to cut back on work load.
But over all it seems interesting. I would just say to round off your ending a bit more. It seems unclear to me from what ive read, how you would show this kind of moral decision without a long drawn out story of the main characture.
keep with it, im interest to hear/see more
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